From: Richard M. Stallman <rms@gnu.org>
Date: Wed, 21 Apr 2004 19:36:24 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Clarify recent text.
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Clarify recent text.
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diff --git a/etc/NEWS b/etc/NEWS
index a76223b7d48..285dd57a152 100644
--- a/etc/NEWS
+++ b/etc/NEWS
@@ -1950,13 +1950,13 @@ configuration files.
 
 * Lisp Changes in Emacs 21.4
 
-** New functions posn-at-point and posn-at-x-y returns mouse click
-like position information for a visible buffer position or a window
-pixel coordinate.
+** New functions posn-at-point and posn-at-x-y returns
+click-event-style position information for a given visible buffer
+position or for a given window pixel coordinate.
 
-** Function pos-visible-in-window-p how return pixel coordinates and
-partial visiblity state of corresponding row if `partially' arg is
-non-nil.
+** Function pos-visible-in-window-p now returns the pixel coordinates
+and partial visiblity state of the corresponding row, if the PARTIALLY
+arg is non-nil.
 
 ** The function `eql' is now available without requiring the CL package.